[etoys-dev] Quick Guide Revisions

kharness at illinois.edu kharness at illinois.edu
Tue Feb 9 08:19:31 EST 2010


Hi Korakurider,
Thanks for the reminder, I should have remembered to say that is one of the changes I made when I revised the guides. 
Kathleen

---- Original message ----
>Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2010 14:59:27 +0900
>From: Korakurider <korakurider at gmail.com>  
>Subject: Re: [etoys-dev] Quick Guide Revisions  
>To: kharness at illinois.edu
>Cc: etoys-dev at squeakland.org
>
>Hi Kathleen.
>During our localizaton work I found the "Menu Tools" article needs
>revision as Undo button on toolbar had been dropped.
>
>/Korakurider
>
>On Tue, Feb 9, 2010 at 3:26 AM,  <kharness at illinois.edu> wrote:
>> Hi,
>> I revised the Quick Guides to realign text, illustrations, and Scriptors on the book's pages.
>>
>> Is it possible to replace the guides with the revisions. Let me know who to send them to to get into the update stream. They will look much better and the mistake will not keep going out to more new people.
>>
>> The error is in:
>> Script Tile: X and Y Tiles Mark Places on a Grid
>> page 2 top line should have been "Click and hold down on the Y in the tile below."
>> The Quick Guide as it is right now in Etoys refers to X. The Scriptor on that page is about Y so the text in the top line should be Y too.
>>
>> I would have added this to the tracker info but I see a message: Bad Gateway The proxy server received an invalid response from the upstream server. Apache/2.0.63 (Unix) DAV/2 PHP/5.2.1 Resin/3.0.8 Server at tracker.squeakland.org Port 80
>> Regards,
>> Kathleen
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