Welcome to the "Beginners" mailing list

Herbert König herbertkoenig at gmx.net
Mon May 1 19:42:22 UTC 2006


I like the tone of the welcome message but I feel the English is not
completely correct. Some native speaker please look into this.

line 2:
brlso> Squeak is a really cool and powerful environment but Smalltalk is an
I think this should read ...  and (not but) Smalltalk is an elegant and powerful

Not sure about the next two ones.

brlso> elegant and powerful language, however it is different than
however it is different from (not than) traditional languages...?

brlso> traditional languages, so do not hesitate to ask questions. We will do
brlso> our best to answer them and to learn with you. 
omit the to?

brlso> We created this list so that any newcomers in squeak can dare to ask
brlso> all the questions they have, so enjoy it.


Herbert                            mailto:herbertkoenig at gmx.net

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