[Squeakfoundation]Editing pass

[Dan Shafer]

Yeah. Elegant.
--- John Tobler <squeaker@diganet.com> wrote:
> Dan Shafer suggested:
> > "To evolve, maintain, and promote Squeak as a...."
> 
> With yours, we have duplicate evolves but you have herded me back toward my
> original mis-statement.  How about going even simpler:
> 
>  "To evolve Squeak as a well-supported, freely-available, open,
>    portable, and exquisite computing platform."
> 
> John Tobler
> squeaker@diganet.com
> http://cyberjet.tripod.com/grepninjalog/
> 
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------- Dan Shafer, Author and Community Consultant
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 ='=  | Sr. Co-Editor, Online Community Report
      | Author, NanoTech, MegaQuake: Business Implications of
Squeak| Nanotechnology (Spring 2002), Wiley, ISBN 047120045X
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