[Squeakfoundation]re: 3.4 press release

[Cees de Groot]

On Thu, 2003-03-06 at 23:08, Craig Latta wrote:
> 	I would put a comma after "Internet".
Corrected.
> 	I would remove "the".
Corrected.

> "In addition to providing a personal user
> environment, Squeak can serve in various networking structures, ranging
> from classic client-server configurations (such as webserving) to
> peer-to-peer collaboration environments with 3-D interfaces.". 
Flows a bit better so I've taken this version.
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