3.7 draft press release
Doug Way
dway at mailcan.com
Sat Sep 25 16:58:46 UTC 2004
On Sep 24, 2004, at 11:43 PM, Tim Rowledge wrote:
> Tiny tweak - I'd suggest
> ...clearing up one of the Squeak License issues by....
> it just sounds a bit less serious.
>
> We could mention that the VM is a bit faster on most machines and twice
> as fast on RISC OS :-)
A few more small tweaks...
You could probably leave out my intro about it being a "long time
coming", that was more of an explanation for the active squeak-dev
community and may be less relevant for the rest of the world. Maybe go
with "Squeak 3.7 has been released! It is now available for download at
http://squeak.org. Thanks to everyone who contributed in one way or
another."
I'd change "the Accufonts font" to "the Accufonts font set", since it's
more than one font.
Maybe add a comma here: "... an enhanced look and feel, and last but
not least ..." to make it easier to parse. Grammatically you could go
either way, but sometimes with a long list it's good to add a comma
after the second-to-last item.
Otherwise, looks good... thanks for handling this.
- Doug
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