www.squeak.org finally updated
karl
karl.ramberg at chello.se
Sat Jul 2 18:12:06 UTC 2005
Avi Bryant wrote:
> On Jul 2, 2005, at 3:32 PM, Josh Gargus wrote:
>
>
>> I think that Martin raises some good points. A few small changes
>> can go a long way.
>>
>> - The list 'Hot Sites' probably shouldn't be on the front page, for
>> all of the reasons that Martin lists. It would be more appropriate
>> to add a 'Links' or 'Hot Sites' or 'Projects using Squeak' link to
>> the navigation bar on the left.
>>
>> - The order of the links in the navigation bar makes no sense.
>> 'Seaside' comes before 'Documentation'?!? Seaside is very cool, but
>> it does not define Squeak, and probably shouldn't be in the
>> navigation bar at all (just put it under 'Links'/'Hot
>> Sites'/'Projects using Squeak').
>>
>> - If the 'Hot Sites' list is moved from the front page, we need to
>> put more stuff to replace it. I suggest adapting the opening text
>> from the 'About' link:
>>
>> Squeak is an open, highly portable Smalltalk implementation with
>> powerful multimedia facilities. Squeak is the vehicle of a wide
>> range of projects, ranging from education platforms to commercial
>> web application development and beyond. <'beyond' could link to
>> 'Hot Sites' page> Squeak runs on a virtual machine that is written
>> entirely in Smalltalk, making it easy to debug, analyze, change, and
>> port to new platforms.
>>
>> Squeak is available for free via the Internet. Each release
>> includes complete source code, and has platform-independent support
>> for color, sound, network access, and more. A more complete
>> description of what Squeak is and what makes it uniquely powerful
>> can be found here <'here' links to 'About' page>
>>
>>
>> - The 'Get the Squeak CD or the Squeak DVD distributions' line might
>> go in another green box under 'Download' on the right. After all,
>> they are just other ways of getting Squeak.
>>
>> - The 'Documentation' section should prominently list the Squeak
>> Swiki at Georgia Tech. SmallWiki documentation does not belong in
>> the documentation section. Perhaps add a new link at the end of the
>> navigation bar on the left ('This Website'?).
>>
>
> Josh,
>
> Agreed on all counts. I just went in and made a number of these
> changes - I hope the website team doesn't mind, but if they do, hey,
> that's why it's a wiki...
>
> I also did a little cleanup of English grammar and usage, but there's
> still more that could be done there. I don't mind doing another pass
> at that later.
>
> The front page does feel a little short and empty now, though. We
> may want to have a "featured project" or something rather than just
> the list of "hot sites".
It looks nice. The text could be a little beefier
And some pictures to maybe
Karl
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