Hi Michael,

I've updated the flyer. Thank you very much for your corrections.

Bye

2007/10/8, Michael Davies <mykdavies+squeak at gmail.com>:
> On 08/10/2007, Damien Cassou <damien.cassou at gmail.com> wrote:
> > English version: http://damien.cassou.free.fr/smalltalk-flyer-en.pdf
> > Please tell me how it can be improved.
>
> Hi Damien,
> I think it generally reads well - just a number of small typo/grammar
> points below.
>
> Michael
>
> *Important concepts*
> dynamically types -> dynamically typed
> It's -> Its
> small amount -> small number
>
> *Message sending*
> All message send return an object -> All message sends return an object
> All messages are sent to an objects -> All messages are sent to objects
>
> *Keyword messages*
> The first example call -> The first example calls
>
> *Development Environment*
> Most of the Smalltalk implementations comes -> Most of the Smalltalk
> implementations come
> permits the code evaluation -> permits code evaluation
> immediately viewing -> immediately showing
>
> *Visual works*
> for a non-commercial - for non-commercial
>
> *Image*
> It contains -> This contains
>
> *Reflexion* -> *Reflection*
> A language is said reflexive -> A language is said to be reflective
> (reflexion/reflexive are not widely used)
>
> *Dynamic typing*
> Some languages are forcing -> Some languages force
> does not limit its -> does not limit the
>
> *Actions* -> Activities -or- Events
>
> *Internet*
> add news.squeak.org? :-)
>
>


-- 
Damien Cassou