Smalltalk flyer, now in english too

Yoshiki Ohshima yoshiki at vpri.org
Tue Oct 9 06:41:49 UTC 2007


> > 2007/10/8, Norbert Hartl <norbert at hartl.name>:
> >> In the section called keyword messages the last word in the first
> >> paragraph should be colon instead of semicolon, right?
> >
> > Corrected, thank you.
> 
> There is also an occurrence of "binray".
> 
> Maybe a native speaker could enhance the English version ...

  That would be good.  Now, one guy is working on the Japanese version
translated from the English version, and I'm helping him a bit, but I
found a lot of unusual English phrases that seem to be
literal-translation from French.  (like "industrial actors and
Smalltalk editors").

  Michael was taking some measure but it would be nice if he or
somebody goes "all the way" and make it really readable as natural
English.

-- Yoshiki



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