Hi Paolo,

2007/9/18, Paolo Bonzini <bonzini at gnu.org>:
> Damien Cassou wrote:
> > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
> > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
> > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
> > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.
> >
> > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
> > the text, you can tell me how it looks like.
>
> I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because
> that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be.  Mentioning
> files in the context of the image can be confusing.  I would say only
> that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the
> image.  It contains the application code (classes and methods), the
> objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete
> development environment to inspect and debug the application on the
> fly."  That's because the development environment does not need to be
> included once the image is deployed.
>
> I would also alphabetize the glossary.

Thank you for your comments. The flyer has been updated.
http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf

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Damien Cassou