A new version of Slice-Help-VariousEdits was added to project The Inbox:
http://source.squeak.org/inbox/Slice-Help-VariousEdits-sd.1.mcz

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Name: Slice-Help-VariousEdits-sd.1
Author: sd
Time: 12 May 2010, 11:19:52.734 pm
UUID: e3f9228e-78f9-4bdf-b550-d550329fabd9
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Various minor edits for clarity and grammar, and to remove duplication...

Help->Tools->Workspace->What is a Workspace: removed instruction to open a workspace, which appears again on the next page

Help->Tools->Workspace->Open a Workspace:
* removed "(click on the Tools Flap to close it back up)" at end of Tools Flap instructions.  The flap closes by itself when the workspace is dragged out (4.1 update 10142)
* changed World menu instructions from [world menu -> open -> workspace], to [world menu -> Workspace]
* added line to "doit"
* minor edits for grammar and clarity

Help on Help->Introduction: minor grammatical change

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