[Squeakfoundation]Editing pass
John Tobler
squeakfoundation@lists.squeakfoundation.org
Fri, 11 May 2001 15:23:46 -0700
Original:
> To assist in the evolution of Squeak into its ultimate expression as
> an exquisite personal and collaborative computing environment
> that is open, well supported, and freely available across the great
> majority of modern platforms and operating systems.
Too wordy and bureaucratic. Below, find a preliminary hack.
"To evolve Squeak as a well-supported, freely-available, evolving, open,
portable, and exquisite computing platform."
John Tobler
squeaker@diganet.com
http://cyberjet.tripod.com/grepninjalog/