Hi!
I made a tutorial I plan to use for a seaside lecture. It can be downloaded from http://www.iam.unibe.ch/~scg/Teaching/Smalltalk/Seaside.pdf I would be glad for any kind of comments/feedback/English bug fixes :-)
Cheers, Alexandre
On Wed, 27 Oct 2004 17:14:05 +0200, Alexandre Bergel bergel@iam.unibe.ch wrote:
Hi!
I made a tutorial I plan to use for a seaside lecture. It can be downloaded from http://www.iam.unibe.ch/~scg/Teaching/Smalltalk/Seaside.pdf I would be glad for any kind of comments/feedback/English bug fixes :-)
Well, it looks like a great talk, but it's more of a slideshow than a tutorial.
Alexandre Bergel wrote on Wed, 27 Oct 2004 17:14:05 +0200
I would be glad for any kind of comments/feedback/English bug fixes :-)
This is a great introduction to what Seaside is all about. Thanks!
I would add a slide after "Logical Flow" (slide 26) listing the classes you will be using and their instance variables. Then what "cart" in "WAStoreFillCart new cart: cart" (slide 29) is (I am guessing an instance variable of WAStore) might be less confusing.
The only English change I would suggest would be replacing "Useful to generate dynamic web page" in slide 4 with "Useful for generating dynamic web pages", though the original is quite understandable and I am not a native speaker.
-- Jecel
"Useful for" and not "Userful to".
Thanks! Alexandre
On Thu, Oct 28, 2004 at 11:10:05AM +0300, Jecel Assumpcao Jr wrote:
Alexandre Bergel wrote on Wed, 27 Oct 2004 17:14:05 +0200
I would be glad for any kind of comments/feedback/English bug fixes :-)
This is a great introduction to what Seaside is all about. Thanks!
I would add a slide after "Logical Flow" (slide 26) listing the classes you will be using and their instance variables. Then what "cart" in "WAStoreFillCart new cart: cart" (slide 29) is (I am guessing an instance variable of WAStore) might be less confusing.
The only English change I would suggest would be replacing "Useful to generate dynamic web page" in slide 4 with "Useful for generating dynamic web pages", though the original is quite understandable and I am not a native speaker.
-- Jecel
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