I went through the entire tutorial just now.  I don't think it needs to
be in a window (you can easily move it and minimize it with the
handles).  Also, if someone wants it in a window, there is a halo menu
option for that.  I did notice that the GeeMail morph refuses to obey my
scrollbar preferences though.

Regarding the tutorial itself: I used copies of your morphs to follow
the tutorial.  It might be good if you explain how to use the halos to
copy your morphs.  Also, I noticed that your morphs look like patches
grabbed from the screen and, consequently, they are rectangular with the
background color as part of the morph.  When you use the drawing tool,
morphs have a transparent background (or, more precisely, they don't
include any background).  I'd recommend re-doing the morphs in the
tutorial such that they fit the drawings with no background.  I've
attached an image of what I'm talking about in case this description is
not clear.

Otherwise, it looks good.

- Stephen

> -----Original Message-----
> From: squeak-dev-admin at lists.squeakfoundation.org 
> [mailto:squeak-dev-admin at lists.squeakfoundation.org] On 
> Behalf Of Karl Ramberg
> Sent: Saturday, November 03, 2001 10:44 AM
> To: squeak
> Subject: etoy space invader tutorial (alpha)
> 
> 
> I'v written up a tutorial with some of the knowledge I 
> have accumulated about etoy scripting. It's not completed 
> but it would be good to get some feedback at this stage...
> I'm not used to write tutorials and find it hard to get from 
> the click-on-that-button-and-do-this stage to acutally teach. 
> 
> I guess you must have a little basic knowledge of Squeak, 
> morphic, halos and etoys to get anywhere with this tutorial. 
> You will find some tutorials on the basic stuff at squeakland.org.
> 
> Here is the url to my project at the BSS
> 
http://209.143.91.36/super/503

ejoy :-)
Karl

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